Wednesday 6 September 2017

World War 1 draft writing

This is my draft. This is my work that I have done. CHECK MY WORK OUT!.

2 comments:

  1. Greetings Tracey good work with writing good we are not in that time
    the Sentence "One Evening it was warm the day was horrible "how about
    " The horrible day has come as the first war stars".good work Anna

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